Few years ago i had an amazing time in Paris with my brother and father. I’ve been in Paris for a quite many times but especially this holiday in July, 2008 in Paris was fantastic. We leaved Helsinki-Vantaa airport in early of morning and the flight took for about 3-4 hours. We arrived to Paris Orly Airport in mid-day. Its always amazing to arrive in Paris especially in a beautiful day and because it was in the middle of summer the temperature was much higher than in Finland. We took a taxi and went to town district of Paris called Charenton-le-Pont where my cousins from my father’s side live. In the evening we ate a good meal , drank some tea and went to sleep.
Second day we decided to go out and see city. It was so much fun to go round diffrent market places, shopping malls, museums and other intresting places. The place that was quite extraordinary were wax museum in the center of the city. To see famous personalities like Zinedine Zidane, Ronaldo, Elton John and Gandhi in a form of wax doll was conducive. After a wax museum we took a metro to Trocadéro which is huge area next to Eiffel-tower. We walked towards the Eiffel tower and we saw lot of tourists, street-mongers and also French people with their families.
We spend two weeks in France , and we saw lot of great things. Place’s where we were included, Louvre museum, Disneyland Resort Paris , Eiffel tower and much more. We saw all things which you need to see if you are visting in Paris. Good thing is that i have lot of relative’s there so i can visit there any time by and im always welcomed. I recommend you all to visit Paris because i view it as European capital of fashion, art and culture!
Ali
Take a trip with us! 
#1 by Mrs. Puhakka on November 23, 2012 - 10:07 am
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A charming story with lots of challenging vocabulary! Check the grammar, tough. Next time, you could use your senses more to really create the right atmosphere. Now there is a lot of action, and not much description. Paris is the city of love!
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– i = I
– I have been TO Paris __ quite many times
– leave, left, left
– early IN the morning
– the flight took _ 3 hours
– we arrived IN Paris (big place) AT Orly Airport (small place)
– ON a beautiful day http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/prepositions
– THE second day
– Around
– intEresting
– spend, spent, spent
– the Eiffel Tower (sights = every first letter capitalized)
– after THE wax museum (you already mentioned it once!)
– Places THAT WE VISITED
– I recommend PARIS (verb + object) TO YOU ALL
– THE good thing is
– I’m always welcome_
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