The Best Holiday At Thailand!

For me, the best journey was when me and my mom went to Thailand. Before the trip my mom asked me where I wanted to go for my summer holiday and the first place that came to my mind was Thailand. It has always been my dream. Later I heard that my mom had bought the tickets there and she told me that we were going to go there. I felt very happy and excited.

Phuket was so amazing. Just how I had imagined. Obviously we went there by a plane. We had a straight flight to Phuket. I liked everything about the place except, sometimes, the food. The food was usually too spicy and I am not a big fan of spicy food. We always tried to order mild food, but still I somehow always managed to burn my mouth. Our hotel was great. The view from our hotel was priceless. We also went to the zoo. There were so many species that Finland´s zoo doesn´t have, such as elephants, tigers and giraffes. The best part of being there was of course the weather and just chilling out on the beach. It were always very sunny and warm. Overall, the place was very enjoyable. I enjoyed every single minute there and if I had to now choose one place to go to I would go there again.

  1. #1 by Mrs. Puhakka on February 2, 2015 - 12:22 pm

    Contents: Good
    A good topic sentence is informative and looks like the beginning of an article, “The best journey I have been on is the one that took my mom and I to Thailand, the place of my dreams.” The structure of your essay is haphazard, try to be logical and describe just one thing per paragraph using all your senses.

    Media: Room for improvement

    Grammar: Good
    – SO amazing = Incredible
    – by __ plane
    – it WAS sunny (aina yksikkö!)

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