A journey full of experience

At 16th of February year 2014 we travelled to Gran Canaria. I wasn`t so excited because we use to travel a lot. Last year I was 5 times abroad. But now to the point. So we went to the airport at 6am in the morning our plane left. We did all the


My “stuff´´i bought from the shopping center.

normal stuff everyone does in the airport, like dispose our baggage and go through security and so on. Well the flight took 6 and a half hours but it went surprisingly fast because i had my best friend Tessa and my dad with me. As we arrived to Las Palmas de Gran Canaria we could almost smell the Atlantic ocean. From the Airport we had to take a 30min bus drive to the hotel. It was boiling hot in the bus and there was some little kid feeling sick… Our hotel and especially our hotel room was fabulous we had a sea view, a balcony, a ground balcony, and me and Tessa got our own room. It was great. There was also a gift waiting for us in the hotel room from finnmatkat. We had been in the exact same resort so many times we got a present! Thats wonderful. I will not tell every single thing what happens next because everyone knows how the first day goes. But in this trip we had 3 special days. Well me, Tessa and my dad we got all our own days on witch we got to do our favorite stuff. Of course my Dad paid everything so we could do anything we ever wished! First Tessa`s day: In the morning we woke up and went to breakfast and there Tessa told us what we will do. We went drive water scooters! It was so fun without the exception of my broken nail. After that we stayed at the beach and in the evening we went to a really fancy restaurant. Next day was my dad`s day: My dad took us to the biggest waterpark of the whole island. It was called aqua park. We had a blast! He also went to a fish spa. In the evening we ate at a local steak restaurant. And at last my day.


The beach.

Well at my day we went shopping. I bought so much new stuff. My dad couldn’t be at the mall anymore so he left a bit earlier and left us still to the mall. When me and Tessa got back to the hotel my day wasn’t over yet. In the evening we went to a dinner musical which was fantastic! All the performers were scandinavian. They were singing  and dancing while we ate our gurme dinner. And the rest of the holiday we just laid on the pool and did some activities. It was a great holiday and i got so tanned.

  1. #1 by Mrs. Puhakka on February 2, 2015 - 12:42 pm

    Contents: Satisfactory
    Never start a sentence with ‘well’ it is spoken English and does not belong to a written text. All in all your essay is too informal, you need to plan a structure and stick to it. This is more like a list of things you did instead of a description of a place suing all your senses. A good story has some sort of gist, you don’t need to explain what happens at customs if nothing happens there. Focus on the point of your story.

    Media: Very good
    Colorful and fun!

    Grammar: Satisfactory
    – ON February 16th, 2014,
    – i = I (always!)
    – the Atlantic Ocean (geographical names capitalized!)
    – AT the airport
    – we got TO RIDE water scooters
    – WITH the exception of my broken nail
    – THE next day
    – ON my day
    – Tessa and I

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