Phuket A Popular Holiday Destination

Last winter me and my family went to Thailand for a two weeks. Our hotel locate in Phuket which is the largest island in Thailand. Phuket is a great place for family. The weather is always nice, lots of beaches nearby your accommodation and Phuket is also a very peaceful place. But when the night comes that peaceful island changes completely different. In Thailand the night live is very important for a local business. In Phuket you don´t have to walk too far to find a good restaurant because there are many different type of restaurants. Local food is excellent and cheap, thai food is suitable for all. You can choose spicy or not spicy. If you get bored laying down on your hotel swimming pool, I say that go to the beach and rent yourself a jet-ski and head to the wawes. When I was in Thailand me and my family wen to a fishing trip which was a pretty cool. Everybody had their own fishing lines an dif you catch a fish you could choose to keep it or locals can cook it for you inside the boat kitchen. Diving is very popular in Thailand. Thailand has lot of great corals. If you are not interested going to the sea, then you can visit in temples. In Phuket you can find one of worlds largest Buddha statue on top of the mountain. In temples you could see some monks praying and if you are a lucky one you can have a blessing for a monk. When you go inside a temple, you must have to take your shoes off. I don´t actually know why, but you have to do it. One of the coolest things in Thailand is are those vehicles called tuk tuk. Coolest thing about them is that the locals like to decorate their own vehicles. So if you are thinking where to spend your next holiday. I would highly recommend Thailand.

  1. #1 by Mrs. Puhakka on February 3, 2015 - 9:18 am

    Contents: Good
    Where are your paragraphs? For better structure, plan your essay and try to use linking words! There were about three things that you recommended = logical structure. Topic sentence = “I visited Thailand with my family a few years ago and I would like to recommend Phuket to families because of the food, location and beaches.”

    Great details and a lot of information about the culture!

    Media: Room for improvement

    Grammar: Good
    – my family AND I
    – for _ two weeks
    – WAS LOCATED (passiivi!)
    – changes INTO something
    – Thai (capitalize!)
    – world’s = maailman

  2. #2 by morii123 on January 7, 2015 - 4:29 am

    You write really well and the text just goes with the flow. It makes you want to read the text. You also give a nice image of Phuket by talking about all the stuff you could do there and places to go to visit. You also had a few spelling mistakes but everyone makes them mistakes! Also if u had have posted couple pictures it would had made the text more awesome but good job after all 🙂

    • #3 by Mrs. Puhakka on January 8, 2015 - 5:21 pm

      You are very encouraging and polite!
      – the text FLOWS (go with the flow = chillata, mennä muiden mukana)
      – THOSE mistakes
      – u = you
      – If you HAD POSTED (pluskvamperfekti)… it WOULD HAVE MADE… = mennyt konditionaali
      – after all = loppujen lopuksi, all in all = kaiken kaikkiaan

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