An Incredible Vacation In Rome

Country where I visited is Italy. I was in Rome with my grandmother in last ski holiday. Flight there took about 4 hours. So it’s still comfortable travel compared to when I was in Florida. But our Rome trip was great! We saw a lot in there and got to visit a variety of attractions including the Colosseum. Because we were there in February it was quite cold about ten degrees warm. I love Rome and I want definitely go there again. The food there is heavenly! All those pizzas, pastas, mozzarella cheese and steaks! I was in heaven. So every day we woke up and went to breakfast. Then we went to walk around the beautiful city. We ate well and shop a lot. In the end of our journey I was gained weight a lot because of the amazing food. That was our trip. I would definitely go there again.

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Italian spagetti with tomato sauce.

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  1. #1 by Mrs. Puhakka on January 29, 2015 - 12:04 pm

    Contents: Satisfactory
    You need to write at least 2-3 paragraphs (introduction, middle, conclusion). A good topic sentence is informative, “I was in Rome, Italy, with my grandmother during the last ski holiday and it was incredible.” This should be your last sentence, “To sum up, I love Rome and I definitely want to go there again.” Why is it suddenly in the middle? Aim for a logical structure and use a mind map to plan your essay if you must.

    Media: Good

    Grammar: Satisfactory
    – THE flight
    – we saw a lot __ there
    – Use more commas! … it was quite cold there, about 10 degrees __.
    – I DEFINITELY want TO go there again (liikkuva määre!)

  2. #2 by Vukhile on December 21, 2014 - 3:18 pm

    Sounds like you had fun. Had fun reading this.

    • #3 by Mrs. Puhakka on January 8, 2015 - 5:03 pm

      This is not a constructive comment. You need to offer advice, suggestions and perhaps comment on the location itself. WHY did you have fun reading it?

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