Party all night in Rhodes

I was in Rhodes with my parents, two brothers, two sisters and my sisters best friend. We stayed in a really nice hotel near the beach. When we first got there it was extremely hot but we got used to it after a couple of days.

Next morning after breakfast we went shopping to the old town. It was surprisingly far away and we had to walk there. After hours of shopping we headed back to the hotel and went swimming in the pool. I truly loved the swimming pool in our hotel. It was just the right size and the water was refreshing. Later that night we went to dinner. I can’t remember what i ate but everything I ate in Rhodes was absolutely delicious.

At night we went to the bar street with my sister and her best friend. It was so much fun and i met a lot of people from different countries, even some people from Finland. The bar street was definitely the best thing in Rhodes and we went there many times.

Here is my sister with a bartender

 

There was a really nice waterpark in Rhodes with lots of different slides and other cool stuff. We could easily get to the waterpark in 20 minutes with a free bus. It was a very big place so there was a small train going around the waterpark. The train was free and a really easy way to move around the waterpark.

 

 

So this was my holiday in Rhodes. I really enjoyed it and i wish to go there again sometime.

 

 

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  1. #1 by kativanhala on December 4, 2012 - 8:08 am

    Hey Anni!
    I think that your post is really nice and easy to read. It seems like you had a nice holiday. The pictures were also good. Your grammer and your telling were clear to read.
    Its great how you told about so many different thing and not only just one. Maybe next time you can tell more details about something you did. I liked it:)

  2. #2 by Mrs. Puhakka on December 3, 2012 - 8:02 pm

    Contents: Satisfactory
    This is more like a list of events than a descriptive essay. Try to focus on one idea next time and if you must mention many sights and locations, be specific! What was the bar called? Where was the water park? Otherwise, what’s the point? Other travelers want to find these gems that you have recommended too…

    Personally, I would have focused on that one night since your title indicates that your story is abour partying. Stick to the topic!

    Media / appearance: Excellent

    Grammar: Good
    – sisters = siskot, sister’s = siskon
    – THE next morning
    – IN the old town
    – i = I (always!)

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