Last spring I was in Thailand. I was waiting our trip eagerly! There is a very nice and friendly people!
Our trip lasted two weeks and it was our third or fourth time out there. Our flight took thirteen hours so it made me exhausted! When we came to the airport we took a bus to our hotel.
For the few days, we just hung out at the pools and sunbathing. I love the feeling when the sun shines and it’s very hot! 🙂
In the evening, it was a little bit cooler but still pretty hot!
In the evening we went to restaurants and shopping. There is a very many of international restaurants! But we would rather went to the local restaurants. I loved the food in Thailand, it is kind of the same as Chinese food. Some of the food was pretty spicy!
I think everybody should go there and get new experienses! 🙂
Karon beach
Take a trip with us! 
#1 by Ms Leino on December 4, 2011 - 1:26 pm
Contents: Good
A simple, delightful story, although next time I would focus more on the cultural differences like you did with that part about Thai food. Also make sure that each paragraph has it’s own topic so that you are not all over the place. A mind map can help 🙂
Media / appearance: Good
That photo looks like something straight out of a travel brochure – paradise!
Grammar: Satisfactory
– I HAD WAITED FOR our trip
– there ARE very nice people THERE (siellä + jossain on jotain rakenne)
– there ARE many restaurants (“a” viittaa YHTEEN, ei MONIKKOON!)
– experienCes
#2 by veera on November 23, 2011 - 5:04 pm
your trip sounds very nice! I would love to go there too, becose i also love sun 🙂
it would be nice to see some pictures, but i think its good without them too.
and next time you should tell us something abouyt the shops. 🙂
but i like your story and i like the way how you tell that.
very good vilma! 🙂